Esmeralda Agena
Wednesday, January 11, 2012
Will you read my short story and tell me what you think?
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I like it. But it feels mostly like a set up for some larger event. There doesn't seem to be a clear conflict, climax, or resolution. It's definitely neat and good, just doesn't feel complete. Was this part of a larger work you were doing?
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